Symbolism. Working on it as I go. Choosing now what I know is already in the draft and making it more specific. The specific naming of things. A bird becomes a wren or raven.  Ground cover becomes sweet clover. That’s where we are at. Description through POV and symbolism.

The bigger issue will invariably be–when and how to bring in hero#2. Hero #1′s world is coming to life now. If I leave it untouched from the draft, the readers will be heavily invested in Hero #1 and that world–Hero#2 might be like a splash of cold water to the face…I’m just not sure.